Narration: "Oktapodi Love"

The story is about a couple of octopuses, one is orange and the other one is pink. they are hugging in the water. Suddenly, the pink octupus is taken out of water and a man puts in a kind of freezer. The orange octopus is in the water and he sees when the man takes out his partner.

The octopus saw a picture in the man's car of a octopus and a pair of knives and he imagines that his friend will be cut into pieces and he becomes so sad. The man starts to drive the car and the octopus inside the kitchen starts tu run to follow his friend.

The orange octopus achieved to jump and clim of the car and arrive to the co-pilot's door. When the man saw the octopus he yelled and he was so surprised. He hits the orange octopus but he did not move it. The octopus was scared but in the same place. The man hits him many times.

After a hard fight between the two octopuses and the man, he stop the car and the two octopuses go out of his car. The two octopuses want to scape and the angry man starts to follow them, he can't catch them and the two octopuses fall together into a pool's water.They jump so high from pool to pool while the man follows them in his car. The man achieved to take the two animals and he lost the control of the car, so they fall for the stairs.

The two animals achieved to scape from the hands of the man and he fall down with his car to the sea. The two octopuses stayed on the clothes lines of a house and they think that everything was in peace, but suddenly a seagull take the orange octopus flying to the sky. the pink octopus was angry and decides to jump to save to her friend.

{In this type of narrative paragraph I learn that to tell an incident you must use the past tense of the verb to clarify the ideas that are not happening now and use a lot of verbs to describe what does the characters. It was a little bit easy for me because I have been created more paragraphs before, so I knew how to do.}